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a kiss
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In dreams I kiss you
our lips meet
melting into one
fierce, hungry
ravenous with need
two rhythms joining
a symphony of sensation
flesh melding into bliss
this and more
starts with a kiss
our lips meet
melting into one
fierce, hungry
ravenous with need
two rhythms joining
a symphony of sensation
flesh melding into bliss
this and more
starts with a kiss
*nods*
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Your work reminds me, in the finest ways, of the poets of the Hellenistic style in Alexandria in the last two centuries, or so, B. C. Like you, they used compression and brevity as a compelling force in their poems, and you demonstrate their classic style very well.